fanart - Luhan - fail

jako, że chciałam narysować to troszkę inaczej nie poszło mi i jest mniej podobny.

I wanted to draw it a little different, but ...
I failed. Luhan is not similar and it is not the best.
That does not change the fact that I still quite like it.
Please, please, if you have any tips I'd like to read it.
sorry for my english ~ ~
bey bye <3